Aww I was slightly startled that you hadn't gotten more comments on this actually, because I think it is fantastic and if you haven't done it already, I think you should consider posting the story to the Eagle comms. The premise is very intriguing, and I think a lot of people would enjoy reading this!
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Date: 2011-06-11 10:45 pm (UTC)I am so happy to hear that you are writing more!